Again, by this point my work hadn't progressed much because of being distracted by the other modules and struggling with a lack of motivation. I've lost interest in this project so it's really important now that I find something to push me forward again.
We talked through our ideas as a group of 4 and had very little feedback for each other. I think peer crits are always difficult when people don't know enough about your project and it's impossible to tell them everything they would need to know for them to feel as though they're having a decent input unless you're progressed enough with the project which all of us weren't really.
I got a thumbs up about the children's book idea that highlights nastiness in advertising, maybe using the colour schemes from different fast food / junk food companies without exclusively featuring their logos or anything.
I don't know though. I think it needs to be deeper than this and show more of something that not everyone would already know instead of stating the obvious.
Could it have statistical elements?
Action Plan
Draw out any ideas for publication
Mind map and make notes in regards to development of publication ideas
Keep working on essay
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