Today we had a group session to get feedback on our essays. I don't mean to sound negative but I found sharing the session with other people a bit distracting and not very helpful because I didn't feel as though I could take my time with asking any questions or really go into depth about my essay.
Regardless, at least I got a crit from the Turnitin submission.
At the group session I asked about what was meant by triangulation because this was said in the feedback that I got.
- Triangulation: Using critical perspectives from theorists to support my argument. Meaning I need to source more quotes that back up other quotes, points or statements etc.
- I've been told that I need to back up my arguments more.
- Use up to 3 images or examples of advergames to deconstruct. The sources will back up and describe these without me having to go into loads of detail.
I know that my essay still needs a load of work doing to it and I'm still not feeling too confident with CoP. I think I'm just pretty terrible with writing essays and I'm reeeaaally not looking forward to CoP3 at this point. I'll need to find something that can maintain my interest because like with this essay I've lost it.
Publication feedback
Still uncertain what I'm going to do for the publication. Most of my time and effort has been directed towards 503 and 505 so I've been rubbish at organising myself to do enough work on CoP. The feedback was:
- Use the research from the essay
- Don't think about the final piece before doing exploration
- Do more sketchbook work
- Jot down any ideas for CoP3
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